The final version of my first short story. I deliberately let it finish abruptly, a device I have seen before now in the fantasy and sci-fi genres. Not sure if I have made a good job of this but for now I am intending to let it stand and maybe come back to it in the near future with an explanation for the mystery.
I am having problems getting the embedded article sized to be read on the blog page, which I know I have done before. However please click the FULL PAGE icon and it will open in another tab.
Hi John, It's getting interesting.... who will she be and does she think you're spying on her. The mystery continues. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteI have now posted an embedded version of the whole story as it appears on Scribd.com. Having problems with formatting on my blogger page. BTW sorry I am leaving the answer to the readers imagination for now. Hope it doesn't spoil the read.
DeleteOh John, you have to finish this one. I love it. These are the kinds of stories I love to read and I get lost (excuse the pun) in them.
ReplyDeleteI'm happy you were able to get it where we could read it.